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[Penulis] [Takwil Puisi 030] The taste of you

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Post time 8-10-2019 10:47 AM | Show all posts |Read mode
Pemenang [Takwil Puisi 029] MIMPI & IMPIAN


Tahniah pemenang

@salamon


Maksud sajak ni keseluruhannya adalah:-

Setiap manusia mempunyai impian masing2. Ada diantara kita untuk mencapai impian tersebut kebiasaannya bermula dari mimpi (angan-angan) sebab x semua yang kita hendak akan dpat dalam sekelip mata. Dan daripada angan-angan

Tapi terdapat segelintir yang iri hati dengan impian kita dan cuba bermacam cara untuk membuatkan kita putus asa dengan impian kita. Jadi kesimpulannya jangan pernah putus asa dengan mimpi sebab daripada mimpi itu terjadinya impian dan semoga kita smua mendapat apa yang kita impikan.

Puisi Minggu Ini

Tajuk :
The taste of you
The taste of you
Im walking along the shore
Of the white sandy beach
While lapping waves gently wake the ocean
Welcoming the color of the sunrise
At dawn
Palettes of orange, blue, red and pink
The rainbow of our love
Im floating in the memories
Of your touches and your kisses
The beating of your heart
And the sweet taste of you.
As our bodies become one
Until we meet again
I carry the taste of you
And the endless nights of pleasures
Like the white sands along the shore
Safeguarding the ocean....
by,

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Post time 8-10-2019 03:07 PM | Show all posts
yeay. menang mimpi impiannn. thank you seribulan

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Post time 8-10-2019 04:15 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Tahniah, a very good poem

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Post time 8-10-2019 05:00 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
good poem lisa.

lembuttt je.

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Post time 8-10-2019 05:29 PM | Show all posts
Edited by TalibanRock at 8-10-2019 05:32 PM

The poet reminiscing the memories with his/her lover as he/she pass by the beach  during the dawn. The memories with the lover lingering around the poet while he/she apart from each other. As he/she walking dawn the beach, the poet remembering the passionate and intimate time spending with his/her lover. As the time pass, , the poet promises to lock onto the memories, until they meet once more, again.

*nnti sy tmbh skit lagi..xabes edit. ade urgent things

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Post time 8-10-2019 08:11 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Tahniah pemenang

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Post time 9-10-2019 08:47 AM | Show all posts
Wah terima kasih mod kerana memilih sajak I. Sangat touched! Thank you for the opportunity! It gives me encouragement to write more.
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Post time 9-10-2019 08:48 AM | Show all posts
fahdramli replied at 8-10-2019 04:15 PM
Tahniah, a very good poem

Terima kasih. Happynya, senyum sampai ke telinga pagi ni.

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Post time 9-10-2019 08:50 AM | Show all posts
KILL_NANCY replied at 8-10-2019 05:00 PM
good poem lisa.

lembuttt je.

Thank you Mr Poet, coming from you its an honour!
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Post time 9-10-2019 08:51 AM | Show all posts
TalibanRock replied at 8-10-2019 05:29 PM
The poet reminiscing the memories with his/her lover as he/she pass by the beach  during the dawn. T ...

Terima kasih sebab cuba decipher the meaning. And sebab referred to me as a poet! rasa sangat bangga! Thank you for making my day.
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Post time 9-10-2019 01:06 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Tahniah @salamon. Tahniah lisa. Sweet jer puisi ni

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Post time 9-10-2019 04:37 PM | Show all posts
  • This article caught my eye. Great!



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Post time 10-10-2019 08:37 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Owwww.. nervous meolls nak takwil sajak english ni..

Ok, masa mula2 baca sajak ni terus terasa yang menulis ni romantik orangnya. Bunga bahasa penulis yang mengaitkan orang yang beliau ingati dengan alam mencerminkan yang penulis ni pencinta yang setia. Asyik terbayang kekasih hati/better half beliau.

Penulis ni pun ibarat mabuk rindu dengan kekasih hati beliau sebab statement dalam bait terakhir mencerminkan yang penulis sentiasa teringat memori sweet dengan kekasih hati

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Post time 11-10-2019 08:27 AM | Show all posts
aleX-S replied at 9-10-2019 01:06 PM
Tahniah @salamon. Tahniah lisa. Sweet jer puisi ni

Terima kasih Alex for your kind comment! nice to be appreciated
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Post time 11-10-2019 08:27 AM | Show all posts
lain1524854 replied at 9-10-2019 04:37 PM
  • This article caught my eye. Great!

  • Thank you, I'm assuming you are referring to the poem
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    Post time 11-10-2019 08:28 AM | Show all posts
    Snack_Fruit replied at 10-10-2019 08:37 PM
    Owwww.. nervous meolls nak takwil sajak english ni..

    Ok, masa mula2 baca sajak ni terus terasa ya ...

    Wah, thank you takwil kan puisi I hehe sangat happy!
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    Post time 11-10-2019 06:11 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
    Akak nak cuba takwil puisi english ni. Tak pernah buat.

    Penulis mengingati kenangan bersama tersayang yang telah mewarnai kehidupan dan melindunginya. Biar pun terpisah, penulis berharap dapat kembali melalui saat seperti itu.
    Peristiwa yang menyentuh perasaan amat sukar dilupakan, hanya jika dapat pengganti yang lebih baik barulah kenangan itu semakin pudar.

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    Post time 13-10-2019 05:04 PM | Show all posts
    nk cube jugak..

    penulis  bercerite tentang someone yg die sayang dan kenangan bersama dalam melalui perjalanan hidup..pahit manis waktu bersama..dan walaupun yg tersayang bukan lagi disisi, penulis masih ingat perasaan ketika kekasih hati masih bersama, every kiss, every touch and that sweet memories keep the writer go on with life..

    teringat lagu my memory..ost winter sonata pulak.. kenangan cinta yang xboleh dilupakan..

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    Post time 14-10-2019 01:40 PM | Show all posts
    nak try gak klu tersesat barat, maafkan kaka yea poet

    dlm puisi ni poet nak menyatakan kenangan percintaannya bersama kekasih hati
    apa yg dilalui dan dibuat bersama merupakan suatu yg indah
    dan memori yg tercipta sukar utk dilupakan
    dan poet juga menghrpkan utk bertemu kembali dgn si kekasih hati

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